SOURCE-DERIVED CINEMATIC REVISION BRIEF

The first generated program was considered visually lame even after it contained
many graphics commands.

Revision instructions emphasized:
- intentional composition
- multiple visual layers
- stable reference geometry
- purpose-driven animation
- screen construction over time
- varied transitions
- reusable 3D wireframe logic
- persistent radar targets
- richer orbital displays
- three-part waveform analysis
- real-looking subsystem architecture
- dense 80-column telemetry

Core sentence:
"The viewer should be able to WATCH THE COMPUTER THINK."